Thursday, June 8, 2017

Moon jun young/all assignments/Tues 11 am to 1pm

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  1. vacation presentation.
    Jae Hyun Joo

    1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
    He introduced his experience in Japan, Tokyo. He explained his individual experience well.
    2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
    I think there’s no apparent hook, so it was not so impressive.
    3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
    I think his logic was great, and there was enough example(because it was his story).
    4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
    His closing ment was a little bit hurried, but he finished his presentation well.
    5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids,
    There were some pauses, but there’s nothing more above all.
    6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
    His gesture arouse my attention, and his eye contact was nice too.
    7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
    his volume, pronunciation, and delivery was really nice.

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  2. Generic Presentation Evaluation
    second speech
    Lina Motzkuhn
    1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
    The main purpose of the speech was to show why going to Tokyo is a good vacation idea. It was well addressed.
    2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
    His hook was “I’d like to share a short and cheap tour with those who want to enjoy delicious foods and experience foreign culture easily” which is a good hook.
    3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
    The structure was clear and he gave many examples. The transitions in between were good too.
    4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
    His conclusion was not really clear, but he summarized the point of enjoying the place he picked.
    5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids,
    He is very enthusiastic and even uses Japanese to support his points. He does not use any visual aids.
    6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
    He keeps good eye contact and does not move much.
    Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
    Yes, the volume was clear and understandable.

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