1. Person I Admire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnUPAolKzvI
2. A Great Vacation
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lXuBwahIEfs&t=7s
3. Ice Breaker Speech
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tnl_HQDAIfo
4. Let Me Explain How to Surf
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Rn7KH8qvUE
5. Manners in Smoking
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUk66YnmT9U&t=2s
6. Red wine
Generic Presentation Evaluation
ReplyDelete(Let me explain how to surf)
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
The speaker tried to explain how to surf. The presentation was well presented because the speaker explained the origin and the steps.
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
No, there wasn't a hook. The speaker just explained the topic that he was going to talk about. He could have given a hook that would have caught the audience's attention.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
The overall structure was logical with a good flow. He also did a good job of explaining the steps thoroughly.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
The speaker did a good job of making the conclusion concise. The speaker gave his own suggestion regarding the topic, which was good.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids?
The speaker used powerpoint slides to help the delivery.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
The speaker did not have a lot of movement, however, he presented in a formal manner.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
The speaker used a microphone, which helped the audience to hear clearly and loudly. It was generally a good presentation.
Evaluator: Emily Corbett
ReplyDeleteManners in Smoking
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
the main point of this speech is to have manners while smoking. it was addressed well and in simple, easy to understand terms.
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
it was good. relating to audience. asking them if they had the same experiences as him.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
The structure was logical. there was a clear introduction, body with main points explained and a conclusion. There were good transitions between his ideas.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
The conclusion was a summary of his speech and it was memorable.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids,
No.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
The speaker was sitting and had okay eye contact. I think he was using speaking notes. no gestures.
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
the volume was good. he spoke clear and audibly.