Thursday, June 8, 2017

201400616/Oleg Kim/Presentations list/ Tue 3-4

https://youtu.be/BMX1WSABW5E - Person I Admire


https://youtu.be/CHs_kOIL5H4 - Icebreaker speech (Wasn't graded)

https://youtu.be/zo4MkPi227I - Unit 4 Electric Cars

https://youtu.be/AYX7zjmAtBc - Unit 5 Opinion Speech

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHld14BjwgU - Final Presentation. Second major assignment 


Thank you for a great semester! 

2 comments:

  1. Travel Idea
    Jae Hyun Joo

    1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
    He introduced Japan for his adorable place to go.
    2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
    There was no actual hook, but his presentation was nice without any hook.
    3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
    I think his logic was great, and the content was really nice. He introduced some foods
    4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
    His closing ment was a clear, and it reminded me the content he presented..
    5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids,
    There were enough enthusiasm, but there’s no visual aids.
    6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
    His gesture arouse my attention, and his eye contact and posture was really great.
    7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
    his volume, pronunciation, and delivery was really nice.

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  2. Generic Presentation Evaluation
    First speech
    Lina Motzkuhn
    1. What was the overall purpose of the speech. Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
    The main purpose of the speech was to show why he admired Elone Musk . It was well addressed.
    2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
    Yes, he said he will talk about someone who’s story is unbelievable. Which is a good hook.
    3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
    Yes the structure is logical in he supports his points with examples.
    4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
    The conclusion was good as it had a nice inspiring message and showed his main point.
    5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids,
    He is very enthusiastic about the person he talks about.
    6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
    He keeps good eye contact and his hand gestures are not too much.
    Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
    Yes, the volume was clear and understandable.

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