Date : May 22nd Evaluator : Jae Hyun Lee Speaker : Moon Jun Young Assignment/Title: -
Your topic has a strong opinion that at the beginning, you are warning the audience to look out for unconditional optimism. And to do this, constructive criticism should be followed. Under this two concepts, your presentation is very coherent and the example of test scores were very understandable. I also liked the way you emphasized the contrasting opinion and then rebuffing it with your opinion. However, your face is too expressionless and especially, your eyes are fixed under the screen as if you are looking down something. But still, you were talking in a very confident manner that you seemed to have practiced a lot. I learned not to believe in optimism too much but rather be aware of the dark side of it. Thank you!
Date : May 22nd
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : Jae Hyun Lee
Speaker : Moon Jun Young
Assignment/Title: -
Your topic has a strong opinion that at the beginning, you are warning the audience to look out for unconditional optimism. And to do this, constructive criticism should be followed. Under this two concepts, your presentation is very coherent and the example of test scores were very understandable. I also liked the way you emphasized the contrasting opinion and then rebuffing it with your opinion. However, your face is too expressionless and especially, your eyes are fixed under the screen as if you are looking down something. But still, you were talking in a very confident manner that you seemed to have practiced a lot. I learned not to believe in optimism too much but rather be aware of the dark side of it. Thank you!