Evaluator: Soyun OH (Tue. 1-2) Speaker: Kyoung Dae Young Assignment/Title : Wearing A School Uniforms
1. What was the speaker’s strongest main point? It’s better to wear school uniforms than not! Schools should implement school uniforms. 2. What did you like about the presentation? Above all, your English is really fluent. 3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Pretty well. 4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes, it was well organized, and the message was clear. 5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. Your pronunciation is flawless:) 6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes, you started with how did you choose your topic, and gave 3 reasons why you think school uniforms are great. But for the conclusion, I think it was a little bit short! 7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. Though you said you are not in a good condition, I thought that your voice is still great! And I think you know how to use proper eye contact. 8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? Personally I think it would have been better if you made your conclusion a bit longer, for example using a quote, or sharing your personal experience! 9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole? It was neat, well organized speech! Your message was clear, perfect pronunciation, and appropriate gestures and eye contact! Great job!!!^-^
Evaluator: Emily Corbett Speaker: Kyoung Dae Young Assignment/Title : School Uniforms
1. What was the speaker’s strongest main point? School uniforms are great 2. What did you like about the presentation? I like that the presentation felt comfortable and had a "casual" feel to make the audience feel like listening. 3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Very well. The audience can understand why school uniforms are great. 4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes, this speech showed much preparation. I don't think he used notes and his speech flowed very nicely. 5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes- Very clear and audible, great English. 6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes there was. 7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. As I said previously, I do not think there were any notes used and his eye contact with the camera was good. 8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think this speech was very good but it could have included a joke or something to really draw the audience's attention. 9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole? Overall, the speech was very well done. It was well organised, spoken clearly and a good topic to talk about.
Evaluator: Soyun OH (Tue. 1-2)
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Kyoung Dae Young
Assignment/Title : Wearing A School Uniforms
1. What was the speaker’s strongest main point?
It’s better to wear school uniforms than not! Schools should implement school uniforms.
2. What did you like about the presentation?
Above all, your English is really fluent.
3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Pretty well.
4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, it was well organized, and the message was clear.
5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. Your pronunciation is flawless:)
6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, you started with how did you choose your topic, and gave 3 reasons why you think school uniforms are great. But for the conclusion, I think it was a little bit short!
7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
Though you said you are not in a good condition, I thought that your voice is still great!
And I think you know how to use proper eye contact.
8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Personally I think it would have been better if you made your conclusion a bit longer, for example using a quote, or sharing your personal experience!
9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole?
It was neat, well organized speech! Your message was clear, perfect pronunciation, and appropriate gestures and eye contact! Great job!!!^-^
Evaluator: Emily Corbett
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Kyoung Dae Young
Assignment/Title : School Uniforms
1. What was the speaker’s strongest main point?
School uniforms are great
2. What did you like about the presentation?
I like that the presentation felt comfortable and had a "casual" feel to make the audience feel like listening.
3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Very well. The audience can understand why school uniforms are great.
4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, this speech showed much preparation. I don't think he used notes and his speech flowed very nicely.
5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes- Very clear and audible, great English.
6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes there was.
7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
As I said previously, I do not think there were any notes used and his eye contact with the camera was good.
8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think this speech was very good but it could have included a joke or something to really draw the audience's attention.
9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole?
Overall, the speech was very well done. It was well organised, spoken clearly and a good topic to talk about.