Saturday, May 20, 2017

Jaewon choi/animal testing/tuesday9

https://youtu.be/8PuDQKYeSh4

2 comments:

  1. Date :5.22.2017
    Evaluator: Minhee Woo
    Speaker: Jaewon Choi
    Assignment/Title : Animal testing

    1. What was the speaker’s strongest main point?
    Some animal testing is wrong and should be stopped

    2. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked the contents of the speech which was informative and creative. Also, I liked the visual aids he used, which was simple and helpful.

    3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    Well enough, as the topic is well known and also the speaker introduced the subject briefly in the beginning, I did not have any difficulty in understanding it.

    4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, he memorized the whole presentation very well and he had prepared PowerPoint with various photos.

    5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, it was clear and audible.

    6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes, it was clear.

    7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    There was no use of notes and the eye contact was nicely focused on the camera.

    8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Maybe he could have more focused his opinion on one side (whether agree or disagree) because it seems like he agrees with the benefits of the animal testing which was a little confusing for me(in the beginning of the body part).

    9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole?
    The overall posture, gestures and eye contact seemed very natural and also, I really liked his conclusion where he wrapped up by giving another perspective of the animal testing with the campaign photo.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date: 2017.05.23
    Evaluator: 201601578 Jaekyung, Seo (from TUES 11-13)
    Speaker: Jaewon Choi
    Assignment/Title:
    1. What strong points does the speaker already have?
    Your opinion was that certain animal testing should be banned.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speaker?
    You introduced your opinions well, and it was clearly shown well at the beginning.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, you seemed really well prepared. The powerpoint slides really caught my eye, and I could see that you had put lots of effort in this work.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, I could hear you well, and your voice was very clear. You were fluent, and there was no awkward stops so it was easy for me to understand.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes, it had a very well organized. I liked the introduction the most because it was very clear.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes.
    I could not see well, but you didn’t seem to use notes which shows that you were well prepared. But even if you were it wasn’t distracting at all.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Maybe I think it would be better if it was done in a brighter place. Audiences could see you better and concentrate better,
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked how you used ppt slides. They were really nice, and made you look more prepared. I really enjoyed your speech!

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