Saturday, May 20, 2017

Jang Hajong/ my opinion about voting age/ Tues 11-1 p.m

2 comments:

  1. Speaking Feedback
    Date: 2017.05.23
    Evaluator: 201601578 Jaekyung, Seo (from TUES 11-13)
    Speaker: Jang Hajong
    Assignment/Title:
    1. What strong points does the speaker already have?
    You talked about the voting age of Korea, and I could see that your point was that voting age should be younger.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speaker?
    You introduced yourself well enough at the start.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, I think you were very well prepared. You talked without awkward stops and you were very fluent. You seem to know what you were talking about.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, I could understand you very well. You were very fluent, and your speed was very good. It helped me understand what you wanted to say easily.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes, your speech was very well structured. Especially, your introduction caught my attention right away. I think it was very good to start by asking a question.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes.
    You didn’t use any notes, and this showed me that you were very well prepared. You seemed that you didn’t need notes.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    I think your speech was overall really good, but if I have to say something, maybe more type of hand gestures. You seemed very natural with your hand gestures and it made you seem more confident, but I think it might be better to use different types. But I think it is still very good.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I actually enjoyed your presentation. I liked the topic itself, and I also liked how well practiced your presentation was. Also your opinions were very well explained. I really enjoyed your speech!

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date :
    Evaluator: Heo Sung Ji
    Speaker: Jang ha jong
    Assignment/Title : Opinion speech about voting age

    1. What was the speakers strongest main point?
    : He says that lowing the voting age is good and many environment has to change to prepare teenagers to vote.
    2. What did you like about the presentation?
    :I like his topic, he chose well. Because this topic is issued nowadays. To speech about voting age is meaningful.
    3. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    : He speaks slow and clear so audience can follow him without any visual aids. He organized his presentation well explaining his reasons.
    4. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    : almost yes, but it will be better that he use some visual aids, these will impress audience about his opinion and reasons.
    5. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    : Yes, he talks really well and clearly.
    6. Was there a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    : Yes, he opens his speech by giving question and in body, he explains his reasons well and well organized. Lastly in conclusion he summaries his speech well and show his hope and expectations.
    7. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    : It was good because maybe he memorizes all script and keep looking camera.
    8. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    : It will be better to use some visual aids , if he use that people can remember his opinion and follow him better. e.
    9. What was your overall (positive) evaluation of the speech as a whole?
    : Overall, he did well in his presentation. I can know well what he wants to say and understand his opinion. Maybe this is thanks to his clear and slow voice and he organizes his speech logically well. So it is good speech and good opinion.

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