• Speech Value : 1, The topic is very well chosen as everyone is familiar with it. Plus, she explains the scientific/psychological cause and effect which was very interesting. • Preparation : 2, I could tell that she prepared a lot though the details in the speech and the fact that she has memorized all the contents. • Organization : 1, Effective organization • Opening : 1, interesting and familiar examples of procrastination instantly caught attention. • Body : 2, simple and clear organization ( definition, cause, effect) • Conclusion : 1, summarized and added her own opinion on the topic • Transitions : 2, appropriate and helpful transitions were used • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Maybe, she could have used more gestures while presenting and maybe some photos could be added in the ppt to explain the topic more effectively. • What did you like about the presentation? I really liked the topic she chose, along with the survey results she provided during the speech. It was interesting and also informative speech. Plus, I liked how she showed the list of things that she is going to talk about in one slide in the opening, which guided the audience through the whole speech.
Evaluator: Lina Motzkuhn According to the scale(1~5) from the evaluation format, (1: Excellent ~ 5: need improvement)
Speech value: 1 The speech topic is very relatable, and well chosen. You were very passionate about it. Preparation: 1 The speech shows that a lot of preparation was done, as you even had statistics and a nice ppt. Organization: 2 You had a clear structure and I line throughout the whole presentation. Opening: 1 The opening was very catchy with the story and it was easy to imagine being in the same situation. Body: 2 All three body parts had clear structure and well proportioned. Conclusion: 1 The conclusion made the audience think about your topic, so it restates your point. Transitions: 1 There were appropriate transitions.
*What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Maybe make a little more eye contact. *What did you like about the presentation? That it literally describes my student life.
Title: Proscrastination
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Minhee Woo (Tuesday11-13)
Date: 2017-05-29
• Speech Value : 1, The topic is very well chosen as everyone is familiar with it. Plus, she explains the scientific/psychological cause and effect which was very interesting.
• Preparation : 2, I could tell that she prepared a lot though the details in the speech and the fact that she has memorized all the contents.
• Organization : 1, Effective organization
• Opening : 1, interesting and familiar examples of procrastination instantly caught attention.
• Body : 2, simple and clear organization ( definition, cause, effect)
• Conclusion : 1, summarized and added her own opinion on the topic
• Transitions : 2, appropriate and helpful transitions were used
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Maybe, she could have used more gestures while presenting and maybe some photos could be added in the ppt to explain the topic more effectively.
• What did you like about the presentation?
I really liked the topic she chose, along with the survey results she provided during the speech. It was interesting and also informative speech. Plus, I liked how she showed the list of things that she is going to talk about in one slide in the opening, which guided the audience through the whole speech.
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ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Lina Motzkuhn
ReplyDeleteAccording to the scale(1~5) from the evaluation format,
(1: Excellent ~ 5: need improvement)
Speech value: 1
The speech topic is very relatable, and well chosen. You were very passionate about it.
Preparation: 1
The speech shows that a lot of preparation was done, as you even had statistics and a nice ppt.
Organization: 2
You had a clear structure and I line throughout the whole presentation.
Opening: 1
The opening was very catchy with the story and it was easy to imagine being in the same situation.
Body: 2
All three body parts had clear structure and well proportioned.
Conclusion: 1
The conclusion made the audience think about your topic, so it restates your point.
Transitions: 1
There were appropriate transitions.
*What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Maybe make a little more eye contact.
*What did you like about the presentation?
That it literally describes my student life.