Title: Doyoun kim presenting in english Evaluator: 201601578 Jaekyung Seo (TUES 11-13)
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech? Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed? You talked about how you got to learn English, and how it has helped you to live through your life. You talked about your youth before learning English in a time order. You also gave a short life lesson sentences at the end..
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved? The hook was quite interesting, because you kind of quizzed the audience and lead us to think about what you were going to talk about. It helped me to focus on your speech and feel curious about what you were going to talk about. I think it was effective.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas? I think the structure was logical because it was in order. You had very specific ideas and examples about your topic, and they were very interesting to listen to. Also your ideas were linked well together.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable? Your conclusion was strong because you gave us a short life lesson. It wasn’t heavy, but it was just enough to understand your speech overall. However, I think it would have been better if it was longer.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids? I liked your little light jokes. They were funny, and just enough to keep our attention. It didn’t distract you from your main topic either. I also think you used pauses well to make yourself relaxed.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures. Your body gestures were good, and there wasn’t any unnecessary movements. However, I think it might have been a little better if you looked at your audiences bit more. But it was great overall. You seemed quite relaxed. .
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood? I think your voice was loud and clear for me to understand. You used your vocal skills well which helped me understand your speech better. Also your pronunciation was also clear, and audible.
Title: Doyoun kim presenting in english
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: 201601578 Jaekyung Seo (TUES 11-13)
1. What was the overall purpose of the speech? Try to restate or summarize the main point. How well was it addressed?
You talked about how you got to learn English, and how it has helped you to live through your life. You talked about your youth before learning English in a time order. You also gave a short life lesson sentences at the end..
2. Was there a hook? Was it effective? How could it have been improved?
The hook was quite interesting, because you kind of quizzed the audience and lead us to think about what you were going to talk about. It helped me to focus on your speech and feel curious about what you were going to talk about. I think it was effective.
3. Was the structure logical? Point supported by evidence or examples? Good transitions between ideas?
I think the structure was logical because it was in order. You had very specific ideas and examples about your topic, and they were very interesting to listen to. Also your ideas were linked well together.
4. Was the conclusion concise? Were main points restated or summarized? Was the closing memorable?
Your conclusion was strong because you gave us a short life lesson. It wasn’t heavy, but it was just enough to understand your speech overall. However, I think it would have been better if it was longer.
5. Did the speaker use enthusiasm, pauses, humor, visual aids?
I liked your little light jokes. They were funny, and just enough to keep our attention. It didn’t distract you from your main topic either. I also think you used pauses well to make yourself relaxed.
6. What did you notice about the speaker’s body language? Posture, eye contact, gestures.
Your body gestures were good, and there wasn’t any unnecessary movements. However, I think it might have been a little better if you looked at your audiences bit more. But it was great overall. You seemed quite relaxed. .
7. Was the volume good? Did the speaker enunciate and pronounce clearly? Could everything be understood?
I think your voice was loud and clear for me to understand. You used your vocal skills well which helped me understand your speech better. Also your pronunciation was also clear, and audible.